They smooch quickly.

It's getting better.  The writing is starting to catch back up to the ideas.  What a fun, sexy time for me.  Also, "They smooch quickly" would be a great name for a band.

EXT. STREET - DAY

Young couple in love (FRED and AMY) walk down the street arm-in-arm.  It's obvious from their body language that they're in love as they clamor all over each other on the way down the sidewalk.  It is really nauseating.  They come upon a section of the sidewalk that has beenblocked off.  A sign reads "WET CEMENT."

AMY

Oh, wet cement!  You know what we should do?

Fred

What's that?

AMY

(very childish mode of speech)

We should write our names in it in a heart and it should say "Fred and Amy FOREVER" and that way our love will go on forever!

Fred smiles.

FRED

I love it!  And I love YOU!

AMY

Aw, I love YOU!

They smooch quickly.  Fred looks around to make sure no one is looking and sneaks past the tape surrounding the wet cement.  Amy looks on in glee from outside of the blocked area as Fred kneels down to the wet cement.  He looks up at her and smiles before getting into it.  Tight shot peeking over Fred's shoulder and onto his finger as he writes:

FRED

"Fred...and...Amy...FOREVE--"

Just before he can finish, Fred is interrupted by the sound of a gunshot and blood splattering from Amy's direction all over the wet cement and Fred's hand.

BLACKOUT.